Summer Nights Stories

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--Tranquillite

hehe
everybody everywhere
gives me so many compliments
that other awesome people deserve


but I've seen you around on WCRPG. Welcome!

Okay, so I think that Tragedy and Sad are too close of categories to be together. Maybe I could have sad as a board, and make Tragedy a sub-board, since I think that will get less stories, but still a good portion.

Hi! This is my first story so I would love criques. So the way I'm going to do it is that everyday I'll post a part of my story until I'm finshed.

   A brown cat appeared from the shadows, her claws shining in the moonlight as she padded ahead recklessly. Snarling she growled, "Now you will suffer what I suffered. Eternal darkness!" Another cat who fur color was a russet red looked at the brown cat in surprise. "Who are you?" she snarled back, completely unaware that the cat in front of her was her own sister.
   Smiling evilly, the brown she-cat meowed "My name is Zyra"
   "W-what that was my s-sister's name" meowed red cat.
   "Do you not remember me, Dawn?" asked Zyra, flexing her claws, almost in boredom. Dawn stared at Zyra in horror. Now she knew this was her sister and that her sister was about to kill her. Leaping up high in the air, Dawn tries escape from her den. She had to tell someone what happened or else.. her clan would be destroyed. "Jayce!" she called with desperation showing thick in her voice. No.. No.. This couldn't be happening.
    Zyra was not doing anything that Dawn was doing. She clammy just followed Dawn, her long legs allowed her to go faster then Dawn and when she was by Dawn. Zyra had leaped on her and with one swift bite, took one of her sister's life.

I would love to help